it might have been finished on the plane out to holiday, but i and it got there.
[Supervisor] Of course, I think you do still need to do significant work to disentangle some of the different threads of reasoning that are now in the introduction. In fact, I recommend a complete re-write in which you try to do some more careful exposition of the different postitions people have taken.
…ah, the phd process. just when you’re happy you’ve got somewhere and achieved something, its back to square one: if better armed, and more skilled (the writing is getting better).
[removed document, as academic web services kept on trying to attribute to me, which while correct is a mis-representation given later development]